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, could always use a few tips to get better at Photoshop.
, also link me once your finished, I'd love to see it 
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This looks fine, almost show authentic and colors are okay.
1. Twilight's head seems too straight, try rounding it out more
2. try thickening up the legs, the right fore leg looks fine but the others are too thin (ponies don't require a size scaling on the the legs for proportionality. all the legs can stay the same width.
3. More Line wobble, again minor, something with practice
4. a bit of of a blank/white spot in the tail and by some of the outlines
5. Twi's Neck is a little too thick. but these extended head postures are wierd to do
6. Twi's ear can have the canal opening line detailing line.... detail thing..... as the ear isn't down enough to show the back of the ear.
7. I don't extend the eye lash/line past the the head outlines, I just have it end at the out line and put the eyelash curves on the heads out line. but that's just style you don't need to change it (there are people who draw the eyes covered by hair where I don't. is either wrong? nope just respective styles) so you can ignore this one if you like.
8. oh try to have Twi's coloured Highlights follow the contours of the outside outlines of her mane more (the tail is fine) also I'm pretty sure Twi's horn is in between the two highlights but I can't remember lol.
So euuhhh yah hoped that helped! Still looks better than my crap lol.
2. Yeah... didn't notice that one before :L
3. I see it! I'll use less nodes next time
4. I see it too, I'm so proud of myself
5. What you said
6. That is actually the back of the ear, it's kinda flipped around and folding around the back of the neck
And thanks for the feedback
Once again, I use the emote "
You're welcome, and NO! Really? I never noticed!
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Other than missing a background, it looks great.
Looks like Twi has had too much beer.
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People take this hunk-a-junk-a-art and shove it on one of their backgrounds to make a comic, or a wallpaper, etc.